Acen True Story Part 4 FIREGIRL 'S STORY TELLING POWER
#1
Posted 02 September 2008 - 01:34 PM
Excel is her office doing some work, when she sees one of her wedding gifts unopened. She looks to see who it from ,but doesn't say. So she opens the gift. It is a book but not just any book. This book can make things happen kind of like death note. Excel opens the first page this is what it says "Excel you do not know me but i give you firegirl 's story telling power . Everything that happen has happen so far is because of firegirl writing in this book ."Excel looks through the book and sees Acen True Story."I am telling you this because I what you to know the truth. As you can see this book is not just any book .It is a magic book that whoever wields it and writes in it becomes real. Now you have it. BEWARE FIREGIRL IS LOOKING FOR HER BOOK AND SHE WANTS IT BACK!"
Excel looks at the book writes down "a dog comes in excels' office with the hope diamond around its neck". It happens.With this excel thinking to her self ,she could rule the world. suddenly a knock at her door ( next poster continue the story ,you're in control)
PART 4 FINISH? PART 5 WHEN EVER I GET MY BOOK BACK
AUTHOR of ACEN TRUE STORY(that no one reads)
REXANO
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#4
Posted 02 September 2008 - 03:20 PM
TekoMuto, on Sep 2 2008, 04:15 PM, said:
TekoMuto, on Sep 2 2008, 04:15 PM, said:
Sadly won't be attending ACen 2012. So I'll be taking my cosplay up a notch for 2013.
#6
Posted 02 September 2008 - 04:20 PM
-steals book and starts writing-
There were only a few souls left standing once the Teko finished on what he refers to as Erf. But even though they had survived, they were changed. Some could not bear to part themselves from their new rape master, others closed in and never saw the light of day. A handful chose to fight back.
"The rage Teko has brought upon this planet must be stopped!" The male named Xeno said, crashing his fist into the rubble of the Spaz Store.
"But what can we do?" The poor Tatsumakichan cried falling quickly into tears. "He has....has...those TENTACLES."
"Exactly. They are the source of his torment..." Xeno nodded in agreement with his new right hand man Kasin and opened his mouth to speak only to hear what seemed to be a godly 'Ahem.'
"I believe I am in control of this story!" The group turned to see Excel, scarred but still as modly as ever, walking into the clearing. "And what happens to Teko shall be written by me." Pulling out the book, she took a quill and began to write in a flurry of movements. As she wrote, a ship descended and several cat people ran from it's bays.
"You didn't..." Xeno's eyes grew wide and he took a step back.
"It's her..." Now Tatsu moved back as well.
"This_Chick...you called her?!" Sa-chan wheeled around to face excel and grabbed the book from her hands. "You did! What do you expect her to do?"
"This_Chick is the only one who Teko will listen to. The only one he fears. If you want his wave of terror to end...She is the one we need on our side." Excel moved forward calmly so she was standing at the base of the ramp and yelled up. "T_C!T_C! Get out of your dungeon and see what your precious alien has done here!"
On board the ship, the dominatrix This_Chick, frowned at the rude way she was being addressed and stood from her throne. "That voice is a nuisance to my ears..." she muttered, massaging the two black cat ears that poked from under her hair. "Yor. Take care of that."
Yor, the head of security and prime person to face This_Chick's wrath, nodded. "Prepare 1 st wave of catgirl clones..." A series of beeps and humming said the ships computer had done what was requested. "Launch." The exit bay was suddenly filled with vicious catgirls, claws extended and canines bared.
"I'll take care of this..." The group turned to the voice as Sentinel stepped forward holding a large bag of catnip. Shaking it twice, he quickly gathered the attention of the clones and ran. "Excel! Take care of this quickly! This won't last long!" He cried back as he disappeared into the now abandoned Krystal Karaoke Kavern.
Excel nodded and gathering the ragtag group of remaining survivors, rushed on board the ship. "T_C!"
This_Chick growled and for a moment took her frustrations out on Yor. Once she was calm, she faced Excel. "What do you want?"
"Did you see what you little science project has done to Earth?!"
"And?"
"He needs to be stopped!
"I can't gather intel if I keep him locked away..."
"Da**it, T_C-"
"You will address me better in my presence!"
"-you can't be serious!"
"I am quite serious! Teko and his underlings are hardly something I need to worry about!
"Who do you think everyone is going to target once they realize what happened!"
"We can handle - "
"I'm talking about the entire planet going against you!"
At this T_C grew silent. Many of her loyal followers were from Earth's surface. As well as many of the products she received for her dungeon.
"Just help us out..." Excel continued.
"Very well. For the sake of maintaining my image only."
Excel nodded and with a much more powerful force behind them, the groups began planning for Teko's down fall...
MEANWHILE
Surrounded by his loyal fans, Teko and his ever growing army of Tekopoos, continue to take advantage of Earth's weakend state...
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(PHOTOS)A-cen 2009:Diva(Final Battle) //// Sailor Pluto //// Edward Elric
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#7
Posted 02 September 2008 - 04:23 PM
#8
Posted 02 September 2008 - 04:25 PM
chamgirl89, on Sep 2 2008, 05:23 PM, said:
If I choose to continue...you'll be Teko's right hand follower....
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(PHOTOS)A-cen 2010:Yoruichi(Shinigami Form) //// Saya (Vietnam/Crazy Form) //// Sailor Pluto //// Anthy (Rose Bride)
(PHOTOS)A-cen 2009:Diva(Final Battle) //// Sailor Pluto //// Edward Elric
(PHOTOS)A-cen 2008: Victoria Amon Sena (Original) //// Yoruchi (cat form)////Kuukaku Shiba////Kuroko Aoki - Original J-rock
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#9
Posted 02 September 2008 - 04:26 PM
#10
Posted 02 September 2008 - 04:30 PM
(PHOTOS)A-cen 2011:Edward Elric //// Anthy (Rose Bride) //// Yoruichi(Shinigami Form) //// Diva(Final Battle)
(PHOTOS)A-cen 2010:Yoruichi(Shinigami Form) //// Saya (Vietnam/Crazy Form) //// Sailor Pluto //// Anthy (Rose Bride)
(PHOTOS)A-cen 2009:Diva(Final Battle) //// Sailor Pluto //// Edward Elric
(PHOTOS)A-cen 2008: Victoria Amon Sena (Original) //// Yoruchi (cat form)////Kuukaku Shiba////Kuroko Aoki - Original J-rock
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#11
Posted 02 September 2008 - 04:32 PM
#12
Posted 02 September 2008 - 04:32 PM
CrimsonAnime, on Sep 3 2008, 12:30 PM, said:
i would but i'm too busy with the script and storyboards of the movie and i don't want em crossing over to here (yeah it's like 2 different storyline coolness)
#13
Posted 02 September 2008 - 04:37 PM
(PHOTOS)A-cen 2011:Edward Elric //// Anthy (Rose Bride) //// Yoruichi(Shinigami Form) //// Diva(Final Battle)
(PHOTOS)A-cen 2010:Yoruichi(Shinigami Form) //// Saya (Vietnam/Crazy Form) //// Sailor Pluto //// Anthy (Rose Bride)
(PHOTOS)A-cen 2009:Diva(Final Battle) //// Sailor Pluto //// Edward Elric
(PHOTOS)A-cen 2008: Victoria Amon Sena (Original) //// Yoruchi (cat form)////Kuukaku Shiba////Kuroko Aoki - Original J-rock
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#15
Posted 02 September 2008 - 05:03 PM
<.<
>.>....
STOP STARING AT ME!
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(PHOTOS)A-cen 2010:Yoruichi(Shinigami Form) //// Saya (Vietnam/Crazy Form) //// Sailor Pluto //// Anthy (Rose Bride)
(PHOTOS)A-cen 2009:Diva(Final Battle) //// Sailor Pluto //// Edward Elric
(PHOTOS)A-cen 2008: Victoria Amon Sena (Original) //// Yoruchi (cat form)////Kuukaku Shiba////Kuroko Aoki - Original J-rock
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Posted 02 September 2008 - 05:17 PM
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#17
Posted 02 September 2008 - 05:20 PM
since i am now too interested in this to stop...
I can promise that you will be....
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(PHOTOS)A-cen 2010:Yoruichi(Shinigami Form) //// Saya (Vietnam/Crazy Form) //// Sailor Pluto //// Anthy (Rose Bride)
(PHOTOS)A-cen 2009:Diva(Final Battle) //// Sailor Pluto //// Edward Elric
(PHOTOS)A-cen 2008: Victoria Amon Sena (Original) //// Yoruchi (cat form)////Kuukaku Shiba////Kuroko Aoki - Original J-rock
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#18
Posted 02 September 2008 - 06:22 PM
::wipes a tear from my eye::
Wow, Crimson... that was most excellently written!
...do continue.
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#19
Posted 02 September 2008 - 06:31 PM
-blushes-
well...I guess I have no choice...
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(PHOTOS)A-cen 2010:Yoruichi(Shinigami Form) //// Saya (Vietnam/Crazy Form) //// Sailor Pluto //// Anthy (Rose Bride)
(PHOTOS)A-cen 2009:Diva(Final Battle) //// Sailor Pluto //// Edward Elric
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#22
Posted 02 September 2008 - 08:51 PM
Xenn, on Sep 2 2008, 09:45 PM, said:
Hmmm....I suppose I could use you.....
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(By popular demand...[well actually 2 people and 2 promises] this will continue)
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There was only place, one thing that Teko would say he loved of Erf and would never destroy: its schools. But not for the education. But for the girls who romped around in uniforms. And of course, in the center of this, is where he made his new home. Surrounded by overturned desks and girls in said uniforms, sat Teko, his frightening Tentacles spread out, reaching every corner of the room.
"Hmm...I'm bored..."
Almost instantly four school girls were at his side. His most loyal followers, ready to accept whatever Teko decreed: Sakura, Firegirl, Cham and Kitsu.
"How can we help you, Lord Teko?" Cham asked first wrapping her arms around her favorite alien's neck. She could feel the others glaring at her back, but it didn't matter. Teko had chosen her to be the best of them: The TekoGirls. So what did she care?
"This world was too easy to take over..."
"Shouldn't that make you happy?" Firegirl asked, sitting beside Teko. She was joined by Sakura who immediatly answered. "Of course not! Our Lord Teko enjoys the satisfaction of watching his victims suffer and resist. To conquer so easily...I am ashamed now to have been an earthling at one time..."
Teko nodded smartly. "Kitsu...go and find me someone who is not scarred by the attack on this planet."
"There are already several who followed us. Would you like one of them?"
Teko shook his head and his tentacles crashed against another desk. The splinters flew in every direction and while some buried in the offending tentacle, Teko did not show it. "I want a non willing victim!"
Kitsu shuddered and bowed before leaving the room. Where was she going to find someone now?
~~~~
"Da**it! Does he have no weakness!" Excel's legendary temper exploded in the room and for the fourth time the papers containing all of This_Chick's research went flying through the air. "How...how are we supposed to defeat him? He'll turn everything against us..."
"I have never had a need to tame him..." T_C muttered quietly as she paced the deck of her ship. Her ears and tail were twitching endlessly, proof she was deep in thought, but even then she still seemed to have no answer for the group.
"So we're doomed?" Tatsu asked looking at her companions...."Like Laharl?"
Instantly the room fell silent, save for the hum of machinery. After a few moments it was Chado that spoke. "That shouldn't have happened...but Teko is too much for some people..."
"Then let's make sure that doesn't happen to anyone else!" This time it was the group's quietest member Sa-chan who spoke, a light blush on her cheeks now that everyone was staring at her. "I mean...it's bad right?"
Tatsu nodded and joined her young female friend. "We'll make sure, Sa. I promise you..."
"There maybe other survivors out there..." Kasin said staring out of the window. "We should try to find them...see if they'll help..." He looked back to his group and saw as Xeno nodded in agreement.
"And Sentinel has yet to return as well."
As if on cue, the man ran into the room, bruised and panting. Behind him, the clones had a glint in their eyes that said they had gotten to the catnip.
"How strong was that stuff?" Yor demanded standing and going to his precious clones only to double back as one lashed out at him. "How strong? They have never attacked me before!"
Sentinel chuckled, slightly embarressed. "Well see...I wanted to attract more catgirls...being a sorcerer in training to tame them, I need more to practice on. But the catnip I had wasn't strong enough to get them to come. So I ....borrowed a little from...um...TC when no one was looking. It worked quite well...but I wanted more and I couldn't risk coming back. I tried to repeat the formula...I guess I was off..."
"You imbecile!" This_Chick faced Sentinel and hefted up by what was left of his collar. "You thought to steal from me! And not only that, but do you realize what you have done? The catnip formula which I use is one of a kind, specially made formula specific to my clones! There are ingrediants in it that MUST be present for it to work properly or else - "
Cutting her off, several of the clones let out cries of pain and doubled over, extra ears and tail sprouting from all over their bodies.
"No!" Yor ran to one then glared back at Sentinel. "Do you realize...? Their entire system is unstable...The catnip....it keeps them active...you...you killed them..." Turning away from the disfigured clones, Yor pressed a button on the control pannel and all of them were dumped back outside. "I hope my mistress makes you pay dearly for that..."
Sentinel looked back to T_C wincing at the anger in her eyes. "Sorry?"
T_C only grinned sadistically and nodding to Yor, opened a portal which Sentinnel was immediatly deposited into. "Now, where were we? Ah yes...finding more survivors. I can send a few of my workers with you to make the task easier." Snapping her fingers, 5 unaffected catgirl clones walked from behind a door and joined Sa-chan and Tatsu at the bay doors. "They will also serve to keep in communication with this ship. Treat them well...or suffer the same fate as your friend."
~~~~
Lost as toward what to do, Kitsu fell to her knees only paces away from Teko's new home. "Where will I find someone now? Someone to make my lord Teko pleased?" As though in answer to her question, a portal opened above her, and Sentinel dropped from it. Though he was barely alive and shuddering in the cold since he no long had enough blood in his system to sustain him, Kitsu saw him as perfect. "Teko will love you!" Squealing with glee, Kitsu dragged the tattered man back to the school house for her beloved master.
~~~~
Elsewhere on the scarred planet, the owner of the Spaz Store, Spazchan sat in what was left of his office, fists clenched. "How dare he...how dare he?"
OKAY PEOPLES! I DON'T WANT TO STEAL THIS FROM FIREGIRL26 SO I WILL ONLY CONTINUE IF ASKED. THE TRUE STORIES ARE AFTERALL HER INVENTION.
This post has been edited by CrimsonAnime: 02 September 2008 - 09:01 PM
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#24
Posted 02 September 2008 - 11:04 PM
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Sadly won't be attending ACen 2012. So I'll be taking my cosplay up a notch for 2013.
#26
Posted 02 September 2008 - 11:32 PM
I can't believe I'm in this one (though I sound a little like a whiny emo, lol)...
PLZ UPDATE SOON! (<-- fanfictionDOTnet speak)
Anyway... what happen to Laharl? Did he get raped to death?
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#27
Posted 02 September 2008 - 11:37 PM
Kitsu-chan, on Sep 3 2008, 07:04 PM, said:
i'll still always love you ;3
#28
Posted 02 September 2008 - 11:37 PM
#29
Posted 02 September 2008 - 11:48 PM
TekoMuto, on Sep 3 2008, 12:37 AM, said:
Any chance we could get Teko in suspenders? Don't worry it's a tame pic, but the seller does have one with a ahem Sleeve.
Sadly won't be attending ACen 2012. So I'll be taking my cosplay up a notch for 2013.
#30
Posted 03 September 2008 - 12:01 AM
Kitsu-chan, on Sep 3 2008, 12:48 AM, said:
Any chance we could get Teko in suspenders? Don't worry it's a tame pic, but the seller does have one with a ahem Sleeve.
dammit... I knew I was gonna regret clicking on that.
Is it comfortable? It looks kinda suffocating.
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